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Dr. Daniel Jackson ([personal profile] hi_there_aliens) wrote in [community profile] trans_92012-01-31 05:24 pm

Sobek the Immortal: Bringing a God to His Knees [Closed]

Who: Daniel Jackson, Vala Mal Doran, Eva, The Master, Eleventh Doctor, Jamie McCrimmon
Where: Kalimba (planet side)
Summary: A small crew goes on an archaeological expedition to a jungle planet, where System Lord was imprisoned. Taking Daniel as his host, he captures the crew and tortures them, while rebuilding his fleet.
Warnings: Violence, torture, gore

((Part One and Part Two here))

As time drew on, there was no sign of Stacy, rescue parties or of a single landing pods. The typhoon season approached closer with each day, rain and wind spattering the leaves on some days, varying between intense heat and humidity on other days. The megafauna in the jungles had grown more active too. The earth rumbled under their feet as they starting their migration amidst hooting calls and croaks. Throughout the varying weather, one thing remained constant. The hive of activity around the three step pyramids never ceased, slaves either taking shifts or in the most fanatical cases, working themselves near to death or to death. It was like this all across Kalimba. The call had gone out with the instructions for the slaves: work was to begin on restoring the Crocodile God's fleets underneath each step pyramid all across the planet. They were his Chosen, his Children, and he would ensure they were rewarded for their faith.

The complex swarmed with slaves and guards moving weapons and parts. Sobek and his personal guards were also in and out more often as the fleet began to take shape, often traveling to other sites to check on progress. Stones fell away from each ship as far as the eye could see. More and more of each ha'tak was revealed, while lines of human bodies went inside to work on the interiors. If the number of step pyramids that towered through the jungle were any indication, his fleet would be massive.

((same as Part 2: run your own posts with each other, more private threads with Sobek are available at the start. Part 3 does not have to immediately include end-plot stuff. If you want more CR amongst each other or your character being messed with by Sobek, please do!))
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-13 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
The journey had been fairly uneventful. The Jaffa that had flanked her as they made their way through the pyramid were about as helpful as two pieces of wood at answering Vala's questions, and equally useless at knowing how to handle her. She'd hastily grabbed food as they'd left, and none of them knew if she should be doing that or not. Vala was already testing her newly found limits, and grabbing what she could while she could. She'd even grabbed a swathe of thin gauzy material that had hung by the door and wrapped it around the slashes in her side as they'd first moved out in Sobek's wake.

But she was piecing it all together, it didn't take a genius to work out that the entire slave populace was working on Sobek's fleet. It made sense that the work would be sizeable, she had know idea how long the Goa'uld had waited in stasis for a host to come along but judging from just the undergrowth and disrepair the pyramid had been in when she and the Doctor had first ventured into its depths, it wasn't just decades.

The Al'kesh they were in was like an antiquated version of the Al'Kesh Vala knew, improvements she knew she could make rattled through her mind. Not yet, she'd suggest something in good time. One step at a time, patience was the key here. Start showing interest in his ships too soon and he'd suspect an ulterior motive. She knew that by simply rearranging the sublight engine crystals she was sure she could stop that irritating vibration though. And God it had been tempting.

Dutifully she followed like a good lo'taur when they arrived, it almost felt like a betrayal of the others and of Daniel that she hadn't attemped anything. Gaining control of the ship would have been simple, the crystal panel had been easily accessible the entire time. But haste and impulse had already seen her thwarted once. Vala would have to find patience somehow, not a virtue she was blessed with - more so after months of being kept in a cell. If anything she needed her strength fully returned anyway.

If only these people knew she thought as they stepped out into the settlement, prostrated before a parasite that cared nothing for them besides their productivity.
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-13 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Was he serious? It was sweltering hot out here and just because she'd salvaged her first proper meal in months didn't make her strong enough to stay out in this heat for any length of time. As it was she was surprised there was any flesh for him to cut on her hip in the first place. Okay maybe Vala was exaggerating a little to herself but this heat was baking and she was weak and light headed.

Her retreat was well and truly blocked though, whether it was for shelter or escape. Even if she attempted a run into the cover of the jungle, she'd have to pass the Jaffa first.

Sobek turned to her and she could only take a deep breath to steady herself against what she feared was about to happen.
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-13 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
Watching the scene unfold was like standing in a dream and being unable to affect anything. Nausea overcame her as she rushed forwards to try and stop him, instinct kicking in and wanting to saving the others from the same fate. There was no forethought or plan in her mind, as soon as she moved the Jaffa picked up the staff weapons from their sentinel positions though and Vala helplessly dropped to her knees after only a few steps.

Bile in her throat rose and whether it was the heat or the fact her stomach wasn't used to the food, or the hideous display before her, Vala felt her stomach kick. The contents of her stomach were too much to keep down and try as she did to suppress it, the third wretch saw her splatter the ground with vomit.
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-14 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
The horrific scene continued to play out and Vala could only watch in horror, unable to do anything to save these poor people. They can't possibly have done anything to deserve anything of this magnitude, they were just simple villagers. Farmers with children, young children who too had to look on in horror, cowering behind their elders as Sobek ripped open the bodies of simple farmers as if they were nothing more than cattle.

She should have stopped it, she'd have died trying but she should have stopped it. The idea that she could save Daniel from this had made her value these people's lives above him. The tears behind her eyes that she wouldn't dare to let spill stung as much as the baking dry heat on her back.

Qetesh had been brutal, but this was just sick, his hunger for power and control was tainted with a perversion she'd rarely seen in any Goa'uld. She had to stop herself thinking about Daniel and how he was dealing with this. With any luck these memories would be buried so deep he wouldn't recall them easily. She knew there were events her own mind wouldn't allow her to remember of Qetesh.

"Was that really necessary?" Sobek was walking past her and she dared to question him, even as her own side still bled and he was decorated in the blood of innocents. "You could have just killed them."
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TIME SKIP - After a week of travelling the planet doing much the same D:

[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-16 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
The days passed and Sobek didn't relent in his 'cleansing Kalimba of the blasphemers' blood lines'. It was nothing short of horrific, at times inducing flashbacks of her own time as a Goa'uld. Memories she'd suppressed for a reason. If he was teaching them anything it was that he was a vengeful and bloody God.

Vala had tried to distract him on one occasion, tempt him into staying on the Al'kesh and leaving his revenge behind in pursuit of other pleasures, only for him to view her advances as if he was humouring a puppy briefly before he rebuffed her completely.

She'd thought that was what he wanted her for, she couldn't think of another reason he'd want her by his side, not after he'd clearly refused her offer when they'd first arrived and then kept her locked up and near starved to death. It was the only tool she had aswell, and she wasn't averse to using it in the sudden panic of the moment when she'd realised there were yet more to be slaughtered.

Vala felt like she was achieving nothing more than getting herself fed better, and with that came its own set of guilt issues. He'd said she could have a weapon when he wasn't with her, but so far she hadn't been out of his sight.

The Al'kesh set down in the main Courtyard and she couldn't help feel relief that the ordeal was finally over. Although what was next was anybody's guess. All Vala had achieved was that she was healthier physically and had acquired a change of clothes. Her eyes shot to the tiny windows of the cells wondering if any of the others would be able to see what could only look like a betrayal.
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-25 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
There still had been no weapon forthcoming as promised, Vala thought as he issued his command. It was easier to just focus on the practicalities of survival rather than if anything of the past week or months had affected her. If they had, which they undoubtedly had, Vala was so adept at brushing everything away under a cover of innuendo and sarcasm it was merely second nature to pretend as if everything with herself was fine.

The jewel encrusted dagger by the fruit bowl, meant for slicing the succulent flesh off in slivers presumably was slipped into her waistband before she'd even had chance to consider it. If she'd looked around to see if the Jaffa was watching it would have been too obvious. A bold move was far less suspicious than one made behind furtive glances.
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-25 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
The way she'd taken the blade was as if she had every right to, she'd meant to confuse them. Act as if she'd been given explicit permission from their fake God and perhaps her boldness would be enough to convince them there was nothing awry or amiss. It was a method she'd use many times to steal. If you take the object naturally with no attempt to conceal the act, it's usually left unquestioned or even noticed. Especially given how the slaves since their arrival back here had acted towards her. She was clearly important if for no more reason than he favoured her.

Vala completely misjudged their reaction though and clearly her own talents. As casually and swiftly as she'd taken the dagger she'd started towards the sunken pool. The staff weapon that knocked her legs from under her wasn't even slightly anticipated. She was floored in one swing, the pain from the blow too agonising and sudden to stop her scream.

"What the hell was that for?" She grimaced, teeth gritted against the pain after she was over the initial shock.
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-25 08:17 pm (UTC)(link)
"Actually he has, you complete imbecile." The feigned superior protest came even as she squirmed against his grip, the unsheathed knife in her waistband dug into her side with each twist of her body scratching at her hip and drawing some blood but with him holding her up and her legs still throbbing she barely noticed.

So it wasn't entirely true, but Vala couldn't remember exactly what he'd said and she was well practiced in twisting interpretations to suit her needs. Despite her own weariness and exhaustion she kicked and flailed her legs at him as he reached for the knife, aiming for his crotch. Her own free hand reached for the knife at the same time, managing to grasp the handle underneath his hand with the blade held dangerously close to her side and angled towards it. If he made a grab at it now it was likely to stab her.
Edited 2012-02-26 01:15 (UTC)
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Re: violence

[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-26 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
Vala couldn't scrabble away quick enough as the Jaffa's head crushed in on itself from inside the helmet. Pulling a bruised and already swollen leg from under him with some difficulty where he'd fallen on top of her. The sounds that came from within were sickening, even after what she'd witnessed during the past week.

There was no wretching this time though, simply a desire to distance herself as quickly as possible.

"You know a simple detention system or giving out lines might be something to consider," she said camoflaging the gravity of the situation with her usual sarcasm even as she watched the pool of blood collect underneath the Jaffa. Her mind was working overtime though, no questions asked, Sobek had reacted in an almost protective way of her.
Edited 2012-02-26 09:27 (UTC)
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-26 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Vala's train of thought was already pondering his instant siding with her, but the way he looked her over - she wasn't sure if it was Daniel or Sobek for a moment. He didn't want to see her harmed it would seem, at least not by anyone except himself and even that had been minimal. Plus the knife didn't seem to bother him at all, he would rather she have it than not.

There was genuine concern in his eyes for a brief faltering moment as he hesitated on the edge of saying something. The level of his wrath that was bestowed on the Jaffa that sought to injure her, one of his most trusted Jaffa at that, could only mean one thing.

"Why are you waiting?" She simply asked, careful that her back was turned and that neither Daniel or him would see the fear in her eyes. Vala started to draw the water without turning. Any pain in her legs or the fresh scratches on her side or her bruised wrists subsided completely at the revelation. It was like she'd flicked a switch and turned off her emotions as she watched the water cascading in. She was numb, but after a few minutes she smiled resignedly, glad that Daniel would be free, dead or alive. If she did one good thing in her life that actually worked out, it would be that.
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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-26 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
The 'Age of Scales', what did that mean? The crocodiles, they had scales. His envisioned future glory? Or something else? The fleet was obviously being worked on, she'd witnessed it first hand. He was naming an as yet unrealised reality after himself?

Vala watched the last few trickles of water drip into the sunken pool as if it had hypnotised her. For a long few minutes she simply sat there, perched on the edge, the remains of dried blood on her own body and the room exuded the stench of death.

What was she doing? She could simply run as soon as she got the chance, she had the freedom to pull it off now and she was armed too. A past version of her would have done. Left behind the mess and saved herself and started anew.

The silence in the room was palpable as Vala finally stood back up. A life of what she'd already escaped once before awaited her and she could try to run if she wanted to. But she knew she couldn't, she had to make this right somehow.

"Undress yourself or call another slave." She offered nonchalantly as she walked towards him, certain that anything he might do in retaliation would be minor now she knew what she knew. Something from Vala's eyes was missing, yes there was the spark of defiance as ever, but there was a melancholy resignation that seemed to dull her. "I'm sure you don't want the memory of performing such a lowly task, besides it's not difficult."

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[personal profile] valaunbound 2012-02-27 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
The hot salty tears spilled over freely as suddenly as he'd grabbed her, there was nothing she could do to stop them despite hating herself for them. It was too much, bruised muscle flinched with pain in his grip and he was so close and she'd sentenced herself to her own death.

Daniel's voice and the twisted sadistic intimacy that threatened to pull her in to the facade had tipped her over the edge. Lips trembling in fear as she spoke, her breath whispered against his lips with every word in response.

"You're not Daniel. That's not Daniel. Let him live and I won't kill myself. But you can undress yourself."

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